6F - Journalistic Writing

6F have been looking at the features of journalistic writing by creating newspaper reports of a fictitious burglary. Here is the end of Anish's article:




It is thought that the thief had planned to sell it to buyers as the collection was worth, on average, £210,000. It was well known that Mr. Smith had a large collection of priceless stamps dating back to Victorian times because he would often show people his continuously-growing collection. He was outraged that someone would take his collection with no consideration.

Mr. Smith is currently staying with friends as the police are still searching his property for evidence. For the neighbourhood, it has made them consider their own safety as well as where they leave their belongings. Burglaries are on the rise, like a crime wave breaking over a city, because of government cut-backs on police. As a consequence, thieves are taking advantage of this and more people are becoming victims of crime. 

6R newspaper articles

This week, 6R have been have been learning about journalistic writing and producing our own newspaper article. Here is Maya's.

Burglars steal from the elderly

By Maya _______

An elderly couple’s home was broken into in the early hours yesterday morning, despite the recent installation of a new state-of-the-art burglar alarm.

 The couple, who have lived in their vast, semi-detached house for over fifty years, were the victims of yet another in a series of attacks in their area. Whilst the couple slept, the callous burglars- believed by the police to be a group of experienced youths- entered the property through a window smashing it completely. Having thieved a significant amount of money raised for a campaign nearby along with a necklace known to worth £2000, they made a swift exit through the window they had broken, after they were disturbed by the alarm of the neighbour’s dog.

A passer-by indicated that the attack happened in the early hours of yesterday morning, Monday 19^th January 2015, approximately between 1.am and 3.am as a witness passed the house two times after a party, at 1.am when all was presumably fine and once at 3.am when she had heard a lot of voices and movement in the house. Following their usual routine, the couple, (who retired to bed at 11.am) went to sleep after news on BBCHD. Extremely anxious about their security, both husband and wife, systematically secured each door and window before activating their recently installed state-of-the-art burglar alarm after worries of burglaries in their area. The residents have confirmed to the police that the routine was followed: however the mystery to why the alarmed failed is still undiscovered.

Mr and Mrs Smith, of 48 Beechwood Avenue , Watford, have lived in their property for all of their married life. Situated at the end of the road, the house has an extensive rear garden and front, with two garages which is overlooking a golf course a couple of metes away. Mr and Mrs Smith chose the house because of the unlikeliness of the burglaries and targeted crimes.

Sally Smith, aged 78, and her husband, Jay Smith, aged 81, were both equally devastated upon waking the next morning to find their home had been ransacked.

“We are extremely distraught,” wept Sally. “We were aware of our local area being burgled but never thought we would. We have spent so much time each day, before bed ,making sure all our doors and windows are secure and activating  our alarm. I am utterly devastated .”

Police and forensic investigators were searching for evidence at the house. Although not confirmed, a source from the police station revealed two sets of fingerprints had been found. Police are refusing to answer any questions from the press.

Witnesses in the area at the time of the crime have provided useful information towards catching the criminals. CCTV cameras, installed a few months ago, caught three men, all in dark trousers and jumpers with luminous Nike trainers, running away from the property around 2.55am.

Police records reveal that this burglary is the fifth in North Watford. Recent studies show that elderly people are becoming main targets of such break-ins, due to their age and physical abilities as well as valuable possessions.

Mr and Mrs Smith are currently staying in a nearby hotel until their home is secure once more. Residents of the neighbourhood fear they will be the next target and have been forced to find extra security. Police continue to investigate.

Mouldy Bread!!

This week 6B carried out an experiment to test the best way to preserve bread. We have set it up and eagerly await our results, however stomach churning they may be! Keep looking for updates. 

Spelling Cheerleading by 5G

This week we have been practising spelling our Word of the Week, fiendish. We decided to use our bodies and the outside space to spell it out, now we definitely won't forget how it is spelt!

Descriptive Writng 6B

In our writing group we have been focusing on the features of L4 and 5 writing. We completed a 100 word challenge and then evaluated our work. We then completed a second 100 word challenge. Here are both of Jack's, what improvements has he made?


1st example: Haunted School
Ridgewood school, abandoned for 72 years, was in a radioactive explosion in WW2. Haunted for a long time, 200 people dies, 90% children. Their souls remain there today, not a body to be seen.


If you went inside:
You would see toys rolling on the floor, dirt dripping down from the ceiling and foot marks randomly appearing.


You would hear the wailing of children, creaky floorboards, giggling and windows shattering.


You would taste blood and fear.
You could feel bugs crawling up your legs and a shiver up your spine.
How do I know this? I'm Jack, one of the DEAD children.


Extract 2: The Storm.
SWOOSH! Something knocks me down. I tremble with fear until something or someone touches me. It picks me up and lunges me into a car. It's my mum. We're getting hunted down. My mum doesn't let me look but I know it's not good. It taunts me that I don't even have a clue what it is. Oh No! I catch a glimpse of the hurdling cyclone. I'm scared. Suddenly my mum drives off road and away, we can still feel the tug.

5G's Descriptive Writing

This week, 5G have been looking at using description for effect. We have written descriptions of a volcano erupting as we have been reading a story about a boy who lived in Pompeii in 79 A.D. when Mt. Vesuvius erupted. This is an extract from Teja's description, we hope you enjoy it!

In 79 A.D. a terrible catastrophe befell the city of Pompeii. It was built in the menancing shadow of Mt. Vesuvius and one ill-fated day, the volcano erupted! It buried the city, leaving nothing but ash and the hardening lava as a testament to the terrible destruction that occurred. 

The first evidence of the coming eruption was the rumbling, like that of a giant's belly, deep beneath the mountain. A little while later, this was followed by smoke dancing out of the mouth of the mountain, forming great clouds like those that covered the sky on stormy nights. Suddenly, with a deafening roar, ash and magma poured out of the gaping crater at the top of the volcano and began to race eagerly towards the doomed city. 

5C Volcanoic eruption description

This week in year 5 we have been writing descriptive passages about volcanic eruptions. Here is Dean's work. What descriptive features can you spot?

The deadly volcano slowly starts its immense eruption with a small mysterious groan from deep inside the inner core. Swiftly, emissions of smoke, fiery and heavy, follow these horrifying sounds… It’s a sign of the imminent eruption!

Sweltering, the magma viciously explodes! Turning into raging lava it pierces aggressively out of the ground. Subsequently, the cascading lava pours down, whilst an enormous puff of poisonous smoke showers down over the villages. Damaging objects and consuming people’s lives, chaos ensues everywhere!