As part of our topic 'It's Not Easy Being Green', Year 5 have been writing descriptive poems about the environment and the effect of our actions upon it.
Here is Harry's (5R) poem. What do you think?
Unearthly
mountains of distress
Are piling up
high
Above our neglected
Mother Earth,
Holding her
hostage
And slowly
suffocating her to death.
Astounded
rainforests burst up in smoke
As we stand and
gleefully stare
At the lovely
landscape, burnt with rage
And charred
with destruction.
Cars’ exhausts
clamour
As CO2 is
released from their metallic mouths
And drivers
angrily hit their steering wheels
While waiting
in a prolonged traffic jam.
The sea is
antagonized,
Congested with
our carelessness,
Thronged with
our debris,
Feeling
overwhelmed.
Sorrowfully
contemplating her future,
Mother Earth is
weeping.
Will she be
filled with crystalline oceans and green land
Or
dirt-encrusted seas and noxious landfills for cities?
Hi Harry,
ReplyDeleteI liked the use of onomatopoeia ,alliteration and ideology.
Keep it up
From Shantanu,(Dr S.Radhakrishnan Vidyalaya,Mumbai INDIA)