Friday, 14 March 2014

A Box of Impossibilities

In Year 5, we like to write poems to keep our creative juices flowing! Often, these are based on models of poems we have read. This structure of this one, by Isabella (5R) is adapted from that of Kit Wright's 'The Magic Box'. What would go in your box of impossibilities?


In my box of impossibilities you will find:
A golden planet that never disappears,
A sentence that never ends,
And a waterfall that flows up.
 
 
In my box of impossibilities you will find:
A multi-coloured flower that reaches the sun
A rainbow you can walk on
And a house that is upside down.
 
 
In my box of impossibilities you will find:
A tiger with spots,
A lion with tusks,
And a hippo that is as small as a rice grain.

 

1 comment:

  1. Very good, Isabella! Here are my two ticks and a wish....
    +Stanzas
    +repetition E.G.: In my box of impossiblities
    *alitteration

    From Myrah

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