In Year 5 this week we have been looking at persuasive writing. We wrote letters to the CEO of a fast food chain, encouraging him to make the food at his restaurant healthier. Below is an extract from Jessica's letter. We hope you enjoy it!
Dear Mr Hover,
I am writing to you to encourage you to increase the amount of healthy food on your menu. At the moment, there is nothing healthy on it, you even add sugar to your salads and bread buns! People want to make healthier choices and you can help them to do that.
Excess sugar is very harmful to people's health and your food offerings contain far too much. Sugar can cause diabetes, tooth decay and obesity. Do you care at all about your customers? Your food must change for their benefit. Surely you can see how necessary it is to change your menu and offer your customers a healthy choice?
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