Friday 17 January 2014

Another 100 word challenge

Our 100 word challenge prompt this week was "...the custard tasted like..." Here is Harry and Gershon's writing (5R). We hope you enjoy their vivid description!




Everyone was unanimous. The custard tasted like roasted snails. It looked like rotting carrots, black and deep orange. The bowl containing it was sizeable and the gooey mixture settling in it was bubbling like boiled potatoes. As it slowly landed on my tongue, it felt scorching. I saw sheep's eyes and lambs' livers floating in it...

1 comment:

  1. Well done Gershon and harry here are my two ticks and a wish for you.
    +Adjectives-orange, rotting and sizeable.
    +verbs-snails, arrots and tongue.
    *Maybe use some similes
    from Myrah 5R :)

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