Friday 24 January 2014

Environment poems

As part of our topic 'It's Not Easy Being Green', Year 5 have been writing descriptive poems about the environment and the effect of our actions upon it.

 

Here is Harry's (5R) poem. What do you think?



Unearthly mountains of distress
Are piling up high
Above our neglected Mother Earth,
Holding her hostage
And slowly suffocating her to death.

Astounded rainforests burst up in smoke
As we stand and gleefully stare
At the lovely landscape, burnt with rage
And charred with destruction.

Cars’ exhausts clamour
As CO2 is released from their metallic mouths
And drivers angrily hit their steering wheels
While waiting in a prolonged traffic jam.

The sea is antagonized,
Congested with our carelessness,
Thronged with our debris,
Feeling overwhelmed.

Sorrowfully contemplating her future,
Mother Earth is weeping.
Will she be filled with crystalline oceans and green land
Or dirt-encrusted seas and noxious landfills for cities?

 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harry,
    I liked the use of onomatopoeia ,alliteration and ideology.
    Keep it up
    From Shantanu,(Dr S.Radhakrishnan Vidyalaya,Mumbai INDIA)

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