Thursday 24 September 2015

Dulce et decorum est

In year 6 we have been learning about The First World War.  We have read a range of war poetry and then we wrote our own.  Here is Josie's from 6E.

Dulce Et decorum Est

Standing stiff and wearing camouflaged coats
We soldiers fear haunting bullets the most
While we plod through the mist
As thick as oozing mud
Searching but not finding
Our distant rest
Trudging to the unknown
Trudging to death
Flickering flames of hope dance
Waiting for my presence.

Enemies! Enemies! Quick hide!
A flurry of fear
Stumbling to hide
However someone was still in range
Still out there. BANG!!!
Through the hazy mist we spot him
Floundering like a man in fire or lime
Guttering and spluttering
We load our fallen comrade

If your dreams
Were as horrifying as this
His face withering wildly
Scares of mystery covering his body
The way his blood-spewing back is almost
As though his life is being sucked out of him
My friend if you could see this
 You wouldn’t tell your children
Wanting glory
The old lie:
Dulce et decorum est

Pro patria mori

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