Friday 18 September 2015

Patrick's WW1 poetry

This week, we took inspiration from Wilfred Owen's Dulce et Decorum Est poem. After studying the poem, we wrote our own versions.

Here is Patrick's from 6D:

One more war

Crossed over uncomfortably
Howling like wolves
In pain and sorrowfully,
The soldiers try to
Convince the leader
To be let go but no
The menacing men march
Through the sludge as  
 The sun passes by.
Only darkness only shadows.
The soulless soldiers suffered
With sacks strapped to their
Pain full backs.

Toxic gas! Toxic air! Toxic everywhere
Reload! Reload! Quick…
And fast.
All crumbling and
Dropping like flies!
Soon they start to question themselves.
“Why oh why do we do these
Things?”
They ran to the trench to try
And avoid the swarm of gas.
Screaming like kids
Playing in a field
Full of death.

No way! No way!
How can this be.
The trenches are full of
!RED!
A sorrow, dead body.
Dead human flesh decays
Before your very eyes.
Hear the scream inside your head!

!The destruction is true!

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