Thursday 8 October 2015

War Woes

In 6E we have been writing narratives about WW1. Here are some excerpts:

Deprived of life-saving food, Charles glared down at his undead body. His tattered, scruffy uniform brought previous battles to life. Tears of fear meandered down his crusty, swollen cheeks.- Caleb

Sean entered the soggy trench. He trembled with fear. For the first time he felt his young, tender age of 17 years. He wished he hadn’t lied about his age as he heard gun shots and bombs booming.
- Ellie H

Overwhelmed at his surroundings, Indiana Jones looked into a knife and saw his family.  His uniform, which was made one year ago, had started to get scruffy. He felt abandoned.
 
Crashing down too close for comfort, Indiana heard cannons firing. He whined. Death followed Indiana as he stumbled up and down the trench.
- Liam











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