Showing posts with label narrative writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative writing. Show all posts

Friday, 20 March 2015

Narrative Writing by 5G

This week we have been writing our own original versions of Pandora's Box with one crucial element changed! Below is an extract from Haddy's story. Our focus this week was on editing our writing once we had written it, to ensure that our sentences remained coherent whilst still including impressive features. 

Long ago,when no pain or sorrow existed, there lived a titan named Prometheus. One day he grew tired of gazing at the empty earth and decided to create a new being, mankind. When Zeus (leader of the gods) found out, he was fuming as they looked like gods, which seemed an incredible insult to him and his family.
'Prometheus! How dare you mock my family with your idiotic creation! Dare to anger me again and I promise you, you shall suffer the consequence!' he boomed ferociously.

One day, Prometheus was watching over mankind when he realised they were shivering in the frosty winter air. Hence, he sped up to Mount Olympus (but first reassured himself Zeus wasn't home)  and stole fire from the sun! When Zeus came home, his anger whipped through the kingdom like a tornado! 

Friday, 13 March 2015

Pandora's Box by 5G

This week we have been re-writing the story of Pandora's Box as part of our Myths and Legends/Ancient Greece theme. Below is an extract from Danielle's re-telling. We hope you enjoy it!

Many years ago, when neither sorrow nor pain existed in the world, a powerful titan name Prometheus, summoned all of his power and knowledge to make mankind. He fashioned them from mud and made them look like gods. When Zeus, king of the gods, discovered that mankind looked like his own family, the gods of Olympia, he was outraged!

'Prometheus you menance! How dare you insult my family and I in this way?' he yelled. 

Zeus commanded Prometheus not to give mankind any power or knowledge, in case they ever rivalled the gods. He warned him that this was his last chance...

Friday, 6 March 2015

World Book Day by 5G

Yesterday we celebrated World Book Day and came to school dressed as some of our favourite literary characters. Today we made mini books based on stories we created yesterday incorporating the characters we were dressed as. Here are some of our class with their finished books!