This week we have been re-writing the story of Pandora's Box as part of our Myths and Legends/Ancient Greece theme. Below is an extract from Danielle's re-telling. We hope you enjoy it!
Many years ago, when neither sorrow nor pain existed in the world, a powerful titan name Prometheus, summoned all of his power and knowledge to make mankind. He fashioned them from mud and made them look like gods. When Zeus, king of the gods, discovered that mankind looked like his own family, the gods of Olympia, he was outraged!
'Prometheus you menance! How dare you insult my family and I in this way?' he yelled.
Zeus commanded Prometheus not to give mankind any power or knowledge, in case they ever rivalled the gods. He warned him that this was his last chance...
Danielle, I am very impressed by your use of drop-in clauses and accurate use of commas. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWell done Danielle I really like the use of punctuation that you used throughout the text giving it more effect ! Also I liked how you use commanded giving more detail on how Zues spoke .
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