Friday, 13 March 2015

5E's Pandora's Box Narrative

This week in 5E we have been writing narratives retelling the story of Pandora's Box. Below is Aarthy's narrative:

Startled, Zeus held his head imperviously in his hands. He felt defrauded because of how exasperating Prometheus was to even try to disobey his orders which were not to grant powers to human beings! After all the tears of woe, sorrow and fury Zeus knew there was something he needed to do, something, which would be cunning as a sly fox, arduously Zeus thought…..

Swiftly, Zeus sprinted towards Prometheus and rapidly chained him to a rough rock! As days passed by Epimetheus, (Prometheus’s brother), was told to make a glamorous and stunning girl named Pandora. Several days later, Epimetheus fell in love with Pandora and joyfully got married. Pandora was made with many talents like: being able to cook, sew, sing and dance, however her weakness was curiosity.

Idiosyncratically; on Pandora’s and Epimetheus’s wedding Zeus sympathetically gave an eccentric vast box, which said, “DO NOT OPEN!”. Pondering hard Pandora loathed the dreadful feeling that kept on tugging her to the box. “What’s the point of a present that you can’t use or even open!” Pandora blurted out to Epimetheus.
“We have to follow Zeus’s orders, you remember what ghastly thing he did to Prometheus right!?” Epimetheus requested fustratedly.
“Yeah yeah but it won’t hurt if I take a tiny peek!” Pandora answered whilst rolling her eyes.





1 comment:

  1. Aarthy, I am particularly impressed by the powerful adjectives and verbs you have included in your narrative. It is also wonderful to see such a wide range of punctuation. Well done!

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