In celebration of World Book Day, we brought all our characters together to write a new adventure! Below is an extract from the Mad Hatter's (Luc's) diary about an adventure he had with his companions Where's Wally, Matilda, Elsa and Oliver Twist.
Dear my
cherished chamber of thoughts,
With a sharp
intake of breath, I am collating my thoughts of today’s momentous events. A
sequence of magical happenings has occurred! Let me go back to the beginning….
Fatigued, having
just hosted a barmy Mad Hatters Tea Party, I gulped down a satisfying mug of blue
tea. Suddenly, however, I just plummeted out of Wonderland. Without warning, a mystical
girl cajoled me over. “Who are you?” I asked inquisitively. She introduced herself
as Matilda…
This is a brilliant start to your diary entry Luc. I am impressed with your choice of powerful verbs and the range of sentence types you have used. I can't wait to hear about the rest of the Mad Hatter's adventure! Well done!
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