Sunday, 7 December 2014

100 Word Challenge - 6F

Mamkumba's 100 Word Challenge this week had to incorporate: 'but as the leaves rustled'. Have a look at it below:


Trees were swaying side by side in the storm; but as the leaves rustled, people knew that it was a bad sign to hear leaves actually crackling… BANG! There was a thunderous clatter hurtling down, as a vortex was developing in the dark, leaden sky. A few minutes later, onlookers realised it was a space ship! However, on closer inspection, it looked like it was a little dented and needed fixing up…  The crowd that had gathered volunteered to help fix it as a show of good faith. They thought they had done a good deed, but when the door opened, and they found out who the driver of this unearthly object was, they were shocked…

1 comment:

  1. Well done on successfully including the phrase, 'but as the leaves rustled'. I am impressed by the range of connectives you have used and the way you have ended your writing with a cliff hanger. Well done Mamkumba!

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