Mamkumba's 100 Word Challenge this week had to incorporate: 'but as the leaves rustled'. Have a look at it below:
Trees were swaying side by side in the storm; but as the
leaves rustled, people knew that it was a bad sign to hear leaves actually crackling… BANG! There was a thunderous
clatter hurtling down, as a vortex was developing in the dark, leaden sky. A
few minutes later, onlookers realised it was a space ship! However, on closer
inspection, it looked like it was a little dented and needed fixing up… The crowd that had gathered volunteered to
help fix it as a show of good faith. They thought they had done a good deed,
but when the door opened, and they found out who the driver of this unearthly
object was, they were shocked…
Well done on successfully including the phrase, 'but as the leaves rustled'. I am impressed by the range of connectives you have used and the way you have ended your writing with a cliff hanger. Well done Mamkumba!
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