Flanders Fields,
North Belgium,
26 December 1915
Dear beloved wife,
As I write this letter, the festive season of winter is
falling upon us. I thought that I would write to you because I have a heavy
heart as I am apart from you and our baby girl. I miss you all terribly and
some days, I get the feeling that my heart is a wrecked sunken ship being
battered and swallowed whole by the ravenous seas of despair that is this war.
I haven’t written to you since last year because we constantly go for
inspections such as: Trench Foot, diseases and uniform. The nights are
gradually getting colder and colder. Also, today, an extraordinary event
happened… I will tell you later in this letter!
For now, please tell me about our cheeky monkey! Have you
thought of a good name for her? I have an idea; how about Monica? Oh yes! Have
you taught her how to treat the cats (Clio, Tickles, Chloe, Octavia and Riley)?
I can imagine her sleeping in her colourful cradle, being lulled to sleep by
your beautiful singing; as graceful as a nightingale. I feel quite regretful
for coming to war because I haven’t seen the face of my own child.
Anyway, let’s go back to my extraordinary experience: I
was sitting in our raggedy, rat- infested trench, yearning to be with you and
“Monica”. When all of a sudden, sounds caught my ear. Soothing sounds. I heard
quiet, calm singing coming from a trench; a German trench. I didn’t understand
the words but that song…one of my favourite carols…Silent Night. It filled
no-man’s-land with peace and joy. The words were sung “Stille Nachte…Stille
Nachte”. Once it stirred us up, we were whispering it… then humming it…then
singing it…then shouting it! After that carol class, I slept on the crumbly
floor - which was my bed.
It's nice to see what we have been doing in class this week, to see what i've missed.
ReplyDeleteGood use of alliteration like heavy heart and I like the word ravenous. Great work Melanie.
Owen :-)
I am impressed by your use of figurative language and the range of sentence types included in your letter. In addition, you have used a variety of rhetorical questions to good effect. Well done Melanie!
ReplyDeleteGreat work Melanie! Reading your work gives me more imagination! Keep up the fantastic work!!!
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Thanks for the feedback
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