During the 1950’s the Soviet Union, a colossal and powerful
country, launched the first satellite (Sputnik) into Space. Unfortunately, this
left America trailing behind the Soviet Union in the Space Race. Since this
triumphant moment for the Soviet Union, America was eager and determined to quickly
land the first man on the moon and show the world that they were the most
powerful nation!. So, in 1957 John F. Kennedy (the American president) made a
national promise that by the end of the century America would land a man on the
moon and bring him back to earth safely!
I enjoyed reading this extract of your writing Caleb. I am impressed by the variety of sentence openers and your use of brackets of include additional information. To improve your writing further, re-read this extract and ensure that you have consistently used the correct tense.
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