Years 5 and 6
I really like the use of personification in this poem and how powerful adjectives, such as scorching instead of hot, were selected. Well done!
We really enjoyed listening to your poem! Well done for using alliteration (vast, vicious volcano) and personification (infuriated). To make your poem even better, we thought you could vary the starts of your lines.
I really like the use of personification in this poem and how powerful adjectives, such as scorching instead of hot, were selected. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWe really enjoyed listening to your poem! Well done for using alliteration (vast, vicious volcano) and personification (infuriated). To make your poem even better, we thought you could vary the starts of your lines.
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