This week in Literacy Year 5 have been looking at news reports. After watching News Round and discussing what makes a good news reporter and report, we decided to take on the role of news reporters ourselves. Here are some of our reports, we hope you enjoy watching them!
6F really enjoyed watching your videos. Mamkumba thought that Josie, in particular, had a clear voice and made good eye-contact with the camera. Elle also thought that the use of quotes in the second video was a strong point. In terms of a next step, we thought that the third video could have benefited from a more formal sign-off. The first video needed a bit more eye-contact and maybe some sophisticated connectives could have linked the ideas and news stories. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI also really enjoyed watching your news reports. I was particularly impressed by the use of quotes to support your report.
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