As he opened the sack of sorrow, a
ghastly talking creature jumped out! The dreaded Shrangutan; it was over for Lord
Nulth. Shouting and crying, the beast was loose, despite usually being in his cage! It was the
malevolent Lord Nulth who turned him into this abomination. Part shark, part orangutan, with
teeth as sharp as skewers.
“We meet again… It’s so nice to see you!” Lord
Nulth screeched sarcastically.
“Stop being so arrogant!” All of a
sudden, the Shrangutan had leapt into mid-air and stuck his stone claws into
Lord Nulth.
“Is it over?” one of the minions,
standing to one side, thought aloud. Suddenly, Lord Nulth disappeared with a
cloud of smoke. BOOM… It was. For now…
well done Jason, i liked how you named all of the characters and added ellipses for tension!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Jason I loved the use of adjectives such as arrogant and sarcastically
ReplyDeleteFrom your classmate Jason
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We really enjoyed this Jason, we thought that you used some extremely ambitious vocabulary which we hope to magpie this week. We also really liked your example of a drop-in clause. We are very keen to find out what happens next!
ReplyDeleteI really like your use of figurative language and range of sentence types Jason. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGood use of alliteration and ellipsis. I loved the adjectives. Well Done to Matthew for typing it up.
ReplyDeleteOwen :)
Well done Jason for this amazing piece of work you have produced. I really liked your use of figurative language such as boom! In addition to that I really liked you left it on a cliff hanger as I said well done u should be proud of yourself��
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