Mr Willy Wonka
Mr Willy Wonka, an adroit man,with eyes full of more wonders than the human mind could ever imagine. He wears a purple blazer - as smooth as can be - a smart bow tie and golden trousers over his lanky legs. His hair curls round like little twirls of spaghetti and blows gently in the wind. Brown polished shoes cover his feet, gleaming in the rays of the Sun. His creased face hides an extraordinary talent. This man may look old but that has no effect on his mind, he remains as sharp as any man ever was.
Mr Wonka is a little insane. He is incredibly generous and gave his entire chocolate factory to Charlie after Charlie proved himself to be worthy, Willy Wonka is a great judge of human character. He is rather formal and uses odd phrases in his speech, often confusing people. He is however, an intellectual and a genius inventor!
By Nancy, 5G
I enjoyed reading your character description Nancy and like the way you have included aspects about how he behaves as well as his physical appearance. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNancy, we enjoyed reading your character description. We were impressed by your use of powerful adjectives, e.g. lanky and adroit and varied sentence structure, e.g. "brown polished shoes covered his feet" rather than "he wore brown polished shoes". Be careful with your punctuation - a couple of your commas need to be replaced with semi-colons.
ReplyDelete6R
Wow Nancy, I really enjoyed your ambitious vocabulary and your use of commas.
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