What is trench warfare?
Trenches
A trench is a barrier from the enemy, to keep soldiers
safe. Trenches, the temporary home of soldiers, were most commonly seen during
World War One. Opposing sides would launch attacks across no-man’s-land (the
space between the two front lines). Surprisingly, the first trench line was
completed in November 1914 and by the end of that year it had stretched 475
miles, starting at the North seas. Soldiers dug into the ground, in times of
war, to protect them from the horrid weather conditions, which could be
appalling.
Construction and design
During WW1, soldiers would initially dig a 1 metre by 2
metre hole, to act as somewhere to hide. Then trench boards were placed on the
ground to help with drainage. Eventually, a ‘fire step’ was cut into the walls
to shoot from. At last, sandbags would be laid down to stop the trench from
caving in on itself. Also barbed wire was rolled out to stop determined enemies
from attacking. The front wall (the parapet) was about ten feet tall. The rear
wall (the parados) was lined with sandbags as well. However, in extreme weather,
some sand bags would fall over.
I liked the Adverbs such as commonly and that edingly opener surprisingly; good use of brackets to. Great explanation text Rosieanne.
ReplyDeleteOwen :-)
This is a very informative explanation text Rosieanne. I am impressed by the use of a variety of connectives and a range of sentence types.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the opportunity to read your blog, 6F! Our ticks from 5E are:
ReplyDelete- Key facts. We loved the way you quickly explained what a trench is.
- Adverbs, such as commonly. We felt that that adverbs were really useful in describing the actions.
Our one wish would be:
- Use a wider range of varied openers, particularly in the first sentence. This could really draw the reader in.
Thank you and we look forward to reading your blog again soon!
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